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mybib.bib

@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ Database
 	number = "",
 	pages = " ",
 	year = "2012",
-	note = "Proceedings of the First International Workshop on Euler Diagrams (Euler 2004)",
+	note = " ",
 	issn = "1571-0661",
 	doi = "DOI: 10.1016/j.entcs.2005.02.018",
 	url = "http://www.bsigroup.com/en/assessment-and-certification-services/management-systems/standards-and-schemes/iso-9001/",

submission_thesis/CH4_FMMD/copy.tex

@@ -1223,6 +1223,18 @@ We can thus create a new component derived from analysing the {\fg} where
 %
 the symptoms of failure of the {\fg} are the failure modes of this new `{\dc}'.
 
+
+An outline of the FMMD process is itemised below:
+\begin{itemize}
+ \item Collect components to form a {\fg},
+ \item Create failure cause `test~cases' for all failure modes of the components within the {\fg},
+ \item Analyse the effect of all the test~cases on the operation of the {\fg},
+ \item Determine the common failure modes of the {\fg},
+ \item Create and name a derived component for the {\fg},
+ \item Assign the common failure modes from the {\fg} as the failure modes of the {\dc}.
+\end{itemize}
+
+
 %We can now call our functional~group a sub-system or a derived~component. 
 %The goal here is to know how it will behave under fault conditions !
 %Imagine buying one such `sub~system'  from a very honest vendor.
@@ -1297,8 +1309,11 @@ The UML class diagram in figure
 structure with its associated failure modes.
 %
 From this diagram we see that each component must have at least one failure mode.
+%
 To clearly show that the failure modes are mutually exclusive states, or unitary states associated with one component,
-each failure mode is referenced back to only one component. This constraint is discussed in detail in section~\ref{sec:unitarystate}.
+each failure mode is referenced back to only one component.
+%
+This constraint is discussed in detail in section~\ref{sec:unitarystate}.
 
 %%-%% MTTF STATS CHAPTER MAYBE ??
 %%-%%
@@ -2156,6 +2171,7 @@ we can ensure that all these {\fms} are traceable to subsequent {\dc} {\fms}
 in the model.
 %
 With the above condition true, we term this a `complete' FMMD failure model.
+Ensuring this condition is described in section~\ref{sec:completetest}.
 
 \paragraph{State explosion problem of FMEA solved by FMMD.}
 %
@@ -2164,18 +2180,22 @@ the traditional state explosion problem in FMEA, where each failure
 mode could be considered in the context of all other components in the system
 disappears. 
 %
-This is dealt with formally in section~\ref{sec:cc}.
+This issue addressed formally in section~\ref{sec:cc}.
 
 \paragraph{Uses of the FMMD failure mode model.}
 %
 Having a  failure mode graph/model, where base component failure modes are traceable to top event events,
 provides  a forward search derived failure mode model. 
+A forward search means that we can apply checks to ensure that
+all known component failure
+modes have been considered in the analysis (i.e. completeness as described above).
 %
-%A forward search means that we can apply checks to ensure that
+This means that for every system level failure we can track back to possible causes
-%all known component failure
+in the base components. Coupled with MTTF statistics for the base components
-%modes have been considered in the analysis (i.e. completeness as described above).
+this allows use to predict statistical failure rates for system level failures (this is 
+described in greater detail in section~\ref{sec:determine_fms}).
 %
-We can use this model to derive information
+We can also use the FMMD model to derive information
 to assist in creating related models such as FTA~\cite{nucfta,nasafta},
 traditional FMEA, FMECA~\cite{safeware}[p.344], FMEDA~\cite{scsh}, diagnostics schemas~\cite{dbamafta}
 and other failure mode analysis methodologies.

submission_thesis/appendixes/algorithmic.tex

@@ -806,9 +806,18 @@ given by
 
 $$ dtc(F) = TC $$
 
-In algorithm \ref{alg22}, the function \textbf{chosen} means that the failure modes for a particular test case have been chosen by
+In algorithm \ref{alg22}, the function \textbf{chosen} means that 
-a human operator and are additional to those chosen by the automated process (i.e they are special case test cases involving multiple failure modes)
+the failure modes for a particular test case have been chosen by
-The function \textbf{unitary state} means that all test cases can have no pairs of failure modes sourced from the same component.
+a human operator and are additional to those chosen by the automated process (i.e they are 
+special case test cases involving multiple failure modes)
+The function \textbf{unitary state} means that all test 
+cases can have no pairs of failure modes sourced from the same component.
+
+\label{sec:completetest}
+
+This function also ensure completeness in the model.
+It ensures that for all failure modes in the {\fg} are considered in a test~case.
+
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