diff --git a/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex b/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
index bc95ba8..275765b 100644
--- a/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
+++ b/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ analogue electronics only~\cite{smart_instruments_1514209}.
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 It is termed `smart' because it has some software, or intelligence incorporated into it.
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-For instance, an AVO-8 multi-meter circa 1970, uses only analogue electronics,it can be determined
+For instance, an AVO-8 multi-meter circa 1970, uses only analogue electronics and it can therefore be determined
 using FMEA how component failures within it could affect readings.
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 A modern multi-meter will have a small dedicated micro-processor and sensing electronics, all on the same chip,
@@ -310,8 +310,7 @@ FMEA), to ensure that failure modes within the instrument cannot lead to invalid
 Some work has been performed to offer black~box---or functional testing---of these instruments instead of 
 static analysis~\cite{Bishop:2010:ONT:1886301.1886325}. 
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-However, black box testing of smart instruments is
-yet to be an approved method of validation.
+However, black box testing of smart instruments is yet to be an approved method of validation.
 
 Most modern instruments now use highly integrated electronics coupled to micro-controllers, which read and filter the measurements,
 and interface to an LCD readout.