diff --git a/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex b/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
index da672dd..4cc8e83 100644
--- a/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
+++ b/submission_thesis/CH3_FMEA_criticism/copy.tex
@@ -354,7 +354,7 @@ Traditional FMEA does not cater for the software hardware interface and using
 a distributed system means the signal path will
 cross several hardware/software interfaces\footnote{The complications of introducing a 
 communications protocol and the failure mode characteristics of the communications 
-physical~layer must also be considered in a distributed system.}.
+physical~layer must also be considered for a distributed system.}.
 %of the communications physical layer..
 %
 %, and this leads on to the additional complications
@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ with its multiple passes of the hardware/software
 interface, mean traditional FMEA, for these systems, 
 is impossible to perform.
 %
-The base component failure mode to system failure paradigm is 
+The base component failure mode to system failure paradigm is thus
 utterly anachronistic in the distributed real time system environment.