added citations to support spider

diagrams as logic and theorem proving tools

mybib.bib

@@ -321,7 +321,22 @@ doi={10.1109/RAMS.2009.4914732},
 ISSN={0149-144X}}
 %%#%%
 
-
+@article{Fish200553,
+title = "Investigating Reasoning with Constraint Diagrams ",
+journal = "Electronic Notes in Theoretical Computer Science ",
+volume = "127",
+number = "4",
+pages = "53 - 69",
+year = "2005",
+note = "Proceedings of the Workshop on Visual Languages and Formal Methods (VLFM 2004) Visual Languages and Formal Methods 2004",
+issn = "1571-0661",
+doi = "http://dx.doi.org/10.1016/j.entcs.2004.08.047",
+url = "http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S1571066105001787",
+author = "Andrew Fish and Jean Flower",
+keywords = "Diagrammatic reasoning",
+keywords = "constraint diagrams",
+keywords = "logical inference "
+}
 
 @INPROCEEDINGS{incrementalfmea,
 author={Price, C.J.},
@@ -343,6 +358,22 @@ ISSN={0149-144X},}
   YEAR =         "2008"
 }
 
+
+@MISC{theoremflower,
+year={2004},
+isbn={978-3-540-21268-3},
+booktitle={Diagrammatic Representation and Inference},
+volume={2980},
+series={Lecture Notes in Computer Science},
+editor={Blackwell, AlanF. and Marriott, Kim and Shimojima, Atsushi},
+doi={10.1007/978-3-540-25931-2_17},
+title={Generating Readable Proofs: A Heuristic Approach to Theorem Proving With Spider Diagrams},
+url={http://dx.doi.org/10.1007/978-3-540-25931-2_17},
+publisher={Springer Berlin Heidelberg},
+author={Flower, Jean and Masthoff, Judith and Stapleton, Gem},
+pages={166-181}
+}
+
 % my bib file.
 @INPROCEEDINGS{automatingFMEA1281774,
 author={Papadopoulos, Y. and Parker, D. and Grante, C.},

submission_thesis/CH1_introduction/copy.tex

@@ -101,10 +101,15 @@ I had recently completed an
 MSc and my project was to create an Euler/Spider~Diagram~\cite{howse:spider} editor in Java.
 This editor allowed the user to draw Euler/Spider diagrams, and could then 
 represent these as abstract---i.e. mathematical---definitions.
+%
 The primary motive for writing the Spider diagram editor was to provide an alternative
 to formal languages for software specification.
 %
-Because of my daily work exposure to FMEA, I started thinking of ways to apply formal languages and spider diagrams to
+An added attraction for using spider diagrams was that they could be used in 
+proving logic~\cite{stapleton:atpieds} and theorems~\cite{theoremflower,Fish200553} in an intuitive way.
+%
+Because of my daily work exposure to FMEA, 
+I started thinking of ways to apply formal languages and spider diagrams to
 failure mode analysis.
 %
 %
@@ -127,9 +132,10 @@ Any of the components that could, in failing, create a dangerous state were alre
 documented and approved using failure mode effects analysis (FMEA). 
 %
 This new requirement
-effectively meant that all single and double component failures
+effectively meant that all single and double component failures were
-%double combinations of component failures were
+now required to be analysed. 
-now required to be analysed. This, from a state explosion problem alone,
+%
+This, from a state explosion problem alone,
 meant that it was going to be virtually impossible to perform.
 %
 To compound the problem, %state explosion problem

vmgbibliography.bib

@@ -44,8 +44,7 @@
 
 
 %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%% WEB SITES ONLY  %%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%%
-
+%site,
-@MISC{dau:website,
     author = {{F.~Dau}},
     howpublished = "{http://www.dr-dau.net/eg\_readings.shtml}",
     year = "2006"